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Nice, keep up the good work
-- :iconblackdragonclub: Check it out! Very cool! For the chat go here--->[link] "The object of war is not to die for your country, but to make the other son of a bitch die for his." General Pattoon I like the detail in the hair, and the expression, very intense. And the back ground was a very nice choice, helps you to focus on teh character n .n
-- i want to be flaming when the sun goes down and i want you to sift through my burntblack ashes and find whats left of my ribcage. i want you to catch a songbird to keep inside of it that will sing much more beautifully than i ever did. -throughangelseyes7 You've outdone yourself, Sparkie!
She looks amazing, seriously <3 I like the orb in her hand, and her hair looks soft. can I take her home with me? o-o -- This is an interesting composition. The only thing that bothers me is my eyes go from the feet of your charector to its head. Then it travels to the left to the moon then it scatters around the bats. Then all the sudden i look again and i had forgotten about your blue orb and now my eyes look recklessly around the paper.
(this is just me other viewers will see it differently). Also my eyes tend to roam to the top right of your screen and kinda get lost I think with a few perspective changes and a bit more creativity in the backround you will have this problem fixed!!! (its not really a big problem at all its hardly noticeable and or bothering me I dont know much about digital art, so i dont judge it and its quality. I only talk about the subjects i do understand ^^. Keep working on it and keep exploring creative and inventive ways to present your ideas. SOoner or later all those people who talk bad will talk good! |
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She's holding a blue orb in her left hand, but one doesn't see that light on the rest of her body? For example, I think it might be more realistic if there was more of a blue tinge/shine on her arms, stomach, etc.
The other thing I saw is that the hair looks a bit stiff. Especially with how her head is positioned, I think it might look, again, more realistic if you were to add some extra fly away hairs in places.
Other than those two things, very good drawing
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