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Nina from my Inheritance (Eragon) fanfiction. I think this is finished now. I might change the background later if and when I can be bothered finding a better one.

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I really like the pose the character is in; it seems to fit her well and also goes well with the background. And your anatomy is good as well. I did, though, notice a few things:

She's holding a blue orb in her left hand, but one doesn't see that light on the rest of her body? For example, I think it might be more realistic if there was more of a blue tinge/shine on her arms, stomach, etc.

The other thing I saw is that the hair looks a bit stiff. Especially with how her head is positioned, I think it might look, again, more realistic if you were to add some extra fly away hairs in places.

Other than those two things, very good drawing :)
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:iconfallenangelwarrior:
Nice, keep up the good work

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:D Will do! Thanks.

I've been pacing myself with it so I don't ruin it by racing to finish. :blush: I have a bad habit of doing that...

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:iconkatsumishiokawa:
I like the detail in the hair, and the expression, very intense. And the back ground was a very nice choice, helps you to focus on teh character n .n

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i want to be flaming when the sun goes down
and i want you to sift through my burntblack ashes
and find whats left of my ribcage.
i want you to catch a songbird to keep inside of it
that will sing much more beautifully than i ever did.
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:iconaussie-gal:
^^ Thank you. Recently I've started putting more effort into the stance and fine details in my characters. I'm glad to see it's getting noticed.

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:iconkatsumishiokawa:
yep, good work *thumbs up* n .n

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i want to be flaming when the sun goes down
and i want you to sift through my burntblack ashes
and find whats left of my ribcage.
i want you to catch a songbird to keep inside of it
that will sing much more beautifully than i ever did.
-throughangelseyes7
:iconxxfuzzy-ferretxx:
You've outdone yourself, Sparkie! :heart:

She looks amazing, seriously <3


I like the orb in her hand, and her hair looks soft.


can I take her home with me? o-o

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:iconpmmurphy:
This is an interesting composition. The only thing that bothers me is my eyes go from the feet of your charector to its head. Then it travels to the left to the moon then it scatters around the bats. Then all the sudden i look again and i had forgotten about your blue orb and now my eyes look recklessly around the paper.

(this is just me other viewers will see it differently).

Also my eyes tend to roam to the top right of your screen and kinda get lost :(

I think with a few perspective changes and a bit more creativity in the backround you will have this problem fixed!!! (its not really a big problem at all its hardly noticeable and or bothering me :) )

I dont know much about digital art, so i dont judge it and its quality. I only talk about the subjects i do understand ^^. Keep working on it and keep exploring creative and inventive ways to present your ideas. SOoner or later all those people who talk bad will talk good! :D
:iconaussie-gal:
Thanks for the critique. :heart: I have to learn to avoid so many shinies.

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:blackrose::mangapunksai:*****aussie-gal*****:mangapunksai::blackrose:

*:cd:~:music:A fire burns today, of blasphemy and genocide :music:~:cd:*-- East Jesus Nowhere: Green Day
:iconaussie-gal:
:lmao: Good luck. Vampies don't like being messed with. If you can get her home for 5 minutes without her nomming your neck, you may do as you please. XD

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:blackrose::mangapunksai:*****aussie-gal*****:mangapunksai::blackrose:

*:cd:~:music:A fire burns today, of blasphemy and genocide :music:~:cd:*-- East Jesus Nowhere: Green Day

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